Category: characters

Research and Planning in Writing

I once read a short story, which took place in the 1960’s. There was a scene in which a character pulled out a cell phone and made a call…which is odd, considering the first mobile phone didn’t come out until 1973. This character was not a time traveler, which simply means, the writer didn’t do enough research before writing their story. 

How much research and planning do you do, before writing your story or book? Some work requires only a little research. Others, require extensive research.

When I wrote the first book in the Valentine series, I used a road map. Yes, an actual road map. In the story, Val Entienne drives from Chicago to L.A. to find her father, and I wanted her to use route 66. I also wanted to make sure I had her drive through states route 66 passed through. To some readers, this probably wouldn’t matter. To an anal-retentive like me, it matters, and I’ll give you an example of why.

I’m a New Yorker, and if you’ve been watching films or television shows for the past thirty years or more, you’ve noticed how many films and shows are recorded in New York. Take Law and Order, for example. I can watch an episode, and recognize a landmark or a street, because the show takes place in New York. While watching a scene in John Wick: Chapter Two, I thought, “I know The Continnental isn’t real, but I can tell from surrounding landmarks where its supposed to be located”.  Little details like that can make a huge difference. So, if I’m reading a story, and a character says they’ll meet another character in Chelsea, on 125th Street in New York, I know that’s a mistake. 125th Street is in Harlem, not Chelsea.

I can’t afford a slip-up such as having a character appear to be too young during a particular arc of the storyline.

I’m working on a series thats a prequel to Valentine, and one key detail I needed to focus on, are the characters’ ages. I ended up making a chart of how old certain characters were in the Valentine series, so I could calculate how old they should be in the prequel, Lucia and the Saints, should I need to use them. 

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Val Entienne is 19 when the Valentine series begins, but she’s only 3 during Lucia, so there’s a good chance she won’t be mentioned in the prequel. Again, this may not matter to some readers, but for those who are paying attention, I can’t afford a slip-up such as having a character appear to be too young during a particular arc of the storyline.

Careful planning went into Our Lady of Righteous Rage’s Righteous, too. In this book, the band goes on their first national tour, via an R.V.. I calculated the amount of hours it would take to drive from city to city, to make the story more accurate. For instance, it takes at least two hours to drive from New York to Philadelphia. Anything less than that, would be incorrect. 

I also keep a list of fake birthdays for my characters, so I can have them age appropriately, as the story progresses. If a character starts out as a fourteen year old, and the story takes place across six years, by the end they should be twenty. If they’re only seventeen by the end of story, there’s a problem. This became very important in the Our Lady series, which begins in the 1990’s and goes from there. 

If you decide to use certain landmarks in your story, such as stores or restaurants, and you’re focusing on a particular time frame, you may want to make sure those landmarks still exist, or existed during the time in which your story takes place. I wanted to use the famous CBGB in Our Lady, but the time within the story I wanted to use it, wouldn’t have worked, since CBGB closed in 2006. 

Just a little food for thought. 

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Preview of “Lucia and the Saints: Vol One”

Hello! This month on my website, Woolaston Entertainment, I’m focusing on ebooks, both current and upcoming. The first book in my new series, Lucia and the Saints, should be available either July 6 or July 7, and I plan to release a new volume every week this month. Until then, here’s a sample of the first chapter of the first book. Enjoy!

Chapter One

Lucia Calderon

    “What you must first understand, is that nothing lasts forever. None of us are immortal, and every relationship must eventually end. We are given one life that we can be certain of, and we must do the best we can with that one life.”

    They stood before her; these twelve girls from all walks of life, like disciples receiving the Word. They stood in a huddle on the front lawn of the place they now called home: a sprawling New Orleans mansion. It had taken two and a half weeks to make the place livable, but working in shifts, they had managed to get the work done. The mansion had been a dilapidated mess at first sight: broken windows, peeling paint, weeds growing up the outer walls, and a lawn that was in need of serious care. And that was only the outside. Inside, there were walls that needed to be cleaned and/or painted, broken furniture that needed to be removed, floors that needed to be swept and mopped, and so on and so on. Twelve young women and the fearless leader, had rolled up their sleeves and worked together, and completely remodeled the house. The outside was painted beige with white shutters on either side of every window. Southern magnolias lined the pathway that led to the front door. The front door, was painted white, and the old doorknob was replaced with a solid brass knob, and partnered with four locks. Inside, the marble floor was cleaned and polished, and a large, round wooden table was in the center, taking up some of the space between the double staircase. Upstairs, were fifteen bedrooms, with only thirteen in use. The kitchen had all new stainless steel appliances, and marble countertops. The cabinets were white with gold knobs. The island in the center held the massive sink, with plenty of room to spare.

    The local hardware and furniture stores had become accustomed to seeing them. When they weren’t picking up more paint and tools, they were picking out furniture. The grocery stores knew them, too. Their refrigerator was the last item to arrive for the house, so they didn’t have a place to keep food. Instead, they found themselves heading to the store every day, picking up items that had to be eaten the same day.

    A delivery truck slowly made its way up the long driveway, towards the front of the house. The twelve girls stepped aside and watched it as it pulled up, and two men in gray coveralls climbed out. One of them was holding a clipboard, with several sheets of paper attached to it. He looked around at all of the female faces. “Lucia Calderon?”

    The woman who had addressed the crowd only moments ago, stepped down from the front porch. “I’m Lucia,” she said, brushing away a lock of long brown hair that had fallen across her face. “Do you have my Fleur de Lis?”

    The man with the clipboard smiled at her and nodded. “I’ve got it right here in the truck,” he said. “I just need you to sign for it.” He handed her the clipboard and a pen, and watched as she signed her name at the bottom of the top sheet of paper. She handed it back to him, and he tore off the sheet underneath, and handed it to her.  The other man walked around to the rear of the truck and opened the double-doors. The girls watched in silent awe, as the two men worked together to pull an extremely large box, out of the truck, and set it upon the ground. They open the top, and began to pull away the sides of the box, revealing it’s precious cargo. It was a large Fleur de Lis, carved out of mahogany. “Here it is,” the first man said proudly, as though he had carved the symbol himself. “Five feet tall, four and a half feet wide, and solid mahogany. It was coated with a special waterproof seal, just like you asked. Where do you want it?”

    Lucia turned towards the porch, and pointed to a space just beyond the steps. “Right there, if you would,” she said. The men nodded, and carefully lifted the carving, and carried it up the short flight of steps, placing it where their customer had requested. There were little sighs of admiration from the twelve girls. The men shook Lucia’s hand, gathered the sides of the box, and departed.

    “It’s really amazing,” one of the girls said. “Isn’t it?”

    “The picture online didn’t do it any justice,” Lucia said. “But, here it is, on our front porch. Our new symbol.  From now on, ladies, we’re not just a group of women sharing a house. We’re going to help people, as best we can. From now on, we are The Saints.”

 

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Lucia Milazzo: Who She Is & Why She Matters

When I originally sat down to write the very first Valentine book, I never intended for the story to develop into a series, much less a series with five books and a spin-off series. And I never expected to created so many different characters within these books. But, here we are: nine books so far, with at least 24 different characters (and there are more books and more characters to come!). With a series as complex as Valentine, sometimes you wonder about the very beginning of the story, and often, this beginning isn’t found within the first book. While readers met Val Entienne when she was about to embark upon a dangerous journey to California to save her father, the story of Val, John Rafferty and the Syndicate itself, goes back much much further. It all begins with a woman named Lucia Milazzo.

So, who is Lucia and why is she so important? When I release the first book in my next series, Lucia and the Saints, readers are going to quickly discover, the very paths of the  lives of every character in the Valentine and Valentine Apart series, can be traced back to her in some way. In fact, you can probably play a simple game of  “Six Degrees of Separation” with Lucia and the other characters. Her most important connection, however, will be to John Rafferty.

A woman made you, and someday a woman will unmake you–Lucia Milazzo

Once you meet Lucia, keep an eye on her. Everything within the Syndicate exists because of her.

I’m releasing book one of Lucia and the Saints next month. Stay tuned!

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That Whole “Netflix-Evangelion” Thing…

I recently read an article online about Netflix’s licensing issues with adding the popular anime series, Neon Genesis Evangelion to their streaming service. While I was excited by the idea of a new generation having an opportunity to watch one of my favorite anime of all time, when I read the details of it’s release, I was a bit disappointed.

ADV Films, the studio who originally released the English-dubbed version of the series and the two films, collapsed in 2009. This is where the license issue comes into play. Netflix is unable to use the original voice cast, and instead, is using a brand new cast of voice actors. Kudos to the new actors. But, as a die hard fan of the series, I can’t imagine anyone else providing the voice of Asuka other than Tiffany Grant. And if you’ve seen The End of Evangelion , then you know no one else can do Shinji’s scream except Spike Spencer. 

Eva

On top of all of this, the closing theme song, “Fly Me to the Moon”, is NOT included in the North American release on Netflix. It is included, on Netflix in Japan. So, new voice cast, no “Fly Me to the Moon”…Netflix, I’m beginning to think you shouldn’t have taken on this project in the first place. For viewers who have never watched the series, none of this will make much of a difference. But, for people like me who grew up with this show, it’s kind of a slap in the face.

Will this release be successful? Only time will tell. 

PS: to any Hollywood studio out there thinking about making this series into a live-action film, DON’T. You’ll probably screw that up, too. 

A Snippet of “Lucia and the Saints”

I‘m working on a series of short ebooks, titled Lucia and the Saints.  This will be the second series to act as a spin-off from my Valentine series, and I’m certain readers are going to enjoy it. Here’s another little snippet from what I’m working on. Enjoy!

Lucia burst through the door, huffing and puffing with every step. She could hear John’s footsteps behind her, but she didn’t stop. She didn’t want to. It was always like this: the others looked at her, and saw a woman. A stupid female who didn’t belong in their world. She suddenly felt a hand on her shoulder. John had caught up to her. She paused, and he spun her around to face him.  “Don’t say it,” Lucia said. “I don’t even want to hear it.”

“You need to stop acting like a freight train every time someone says something you don’t like,” John said, dropping his hand from her shoulder. “You can’t run over every person who pisses you off, Lucia.”

Her eyes grew wide with anger. “Did you hear what he said to me?!” she snapped. “He said I was just some dumb broad. A broad! Who the hell even uses that word anymore?!”

“I heard him,” John said, in a soothing tone. “What? You don’t think I get that kind of crap all the time?”

Lucia sighed, and put her hands on her hips. 

“They look at me, they see some Irish hood,” John said. “A mick. Same thing I’ve been hearing most of my life.  They don’t want me hanging around their sons, they definitely don’t want me to date their daughters. They think I’m some kind of joke. They laugh at me. But so what?”

Lucia seemed to be calming down, listening to his words.

“Their sons will get high off of my drugs,” John continued. “And their daughters will dance in my night clubs. Then we’ll see who’s laughing, won’t we?”

 

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Connecting the Dots in Valentine Apart

June is nearly upon us, and I’m working on a few different projects. One of them, is a new addition to the Valentine Apart series.  This series will trace John Rafferty’s origins, the rise of The Syndicate, and the person who trained Allan and Mac Avery. The working title is Lucia and The SaintsI’m planning to release this series in the form of short ebooks, between 25 and 50 pages per book, for 99 cents each. It’s not ready yet, but in the meantime, here’s a tiny snippet of what I’m working on. Enjoy!

          Jacob sat at the end of the bar on the last stool, his glass in his hand. Every few seconds, he glanced at the two people, a man and a woman, talking at the opposite end, who were busy whispering about, what he could only assume, was him. Whenever one of them looked over at him, he would quickly turn away and find some random object inside the bar to stare at: the booths and tables in the dining area, the bartender or the waitresses, the endless wall of framed photos behind the bar. This was his job interview, and so far, it didn’t seem to be going too well.

          “He’s too young,” the woman said. “I have to tell you John, I’m completely against this.”

          “I think he has potential,” John said. “You said so yourself, Lucia: we need fresh blood.”

          “Fresh blood,” Lucia said. “Not young blood. This kid is way too young.” She looked over at Jacob, who had raised his glass to take a sip of his beverage. “Look at him!”

          “What’s wrong with him?” John asked.

          Lucia nodded towards the glass in Jacob’s hand. “He’s drinking chocolate milk, for Christ’s sake!” She spoke in a loud whisper, which got Jacob’s attention. He set his glass down, climbed off of his bar stool, and approached them. 

          “You know, you’ve really got a pair, kid,” John said. Lucia folded her arms. “But I like that.”

         “Thanks,” Jacob said. He used fingers to rake through his sandy-brown hair. “So, am I in, or out?”

         He’s drinking chocolate milk, for Christ’s sake!

          Lucia shook her head. “I don’t like this,” she said. “I don’t like this one bit.”

          “Let’s give him a chance,” John said. He reached up and scratched the back of his head full of jet black hair. “Let’s see how it goes. Lucia?”

          Lucia looked at John in surprise. “Oh, you better not say what I think you’re about to say,” she snapped.

          “There’s no one better for the job,” John said, shrugging his shoulders. “Show him the ropes. It’ll be good for him…and you.”

          Lucia turned to Jacob in disgust. She sighed heavily. “I put bullets in people for a living,” she muttered. “Now I’m a goddamned babysitter.”

 

 

June is Valentine Apart Month on woolastonentertainment.com. Stay tuned for more of Lucia and The Saints!

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